Monday, January 3, 2011

The Boy with the Curse

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One day this boy named John. John had a curse that goes away when he’s with a girl he likes and if he marries her, the curse will break free. The curse was that he was a well behave  boy in the morning but when night comes he is bad to everybody. The girl’s name is Julie, he likes this girl so much, when he sees her he becomes a normal boy again not good or bad. So he wants to marry her and be free from the curse. Since John likes Julie so much he does not know if Julie likes him. So he tries to impress her by acting cool and dressing up nice around her. He even tries to be his secret amour by giving her little notes or even giving flowers and chocolate. Julie is trying to find her secret amour, but she keeps on choosing the wrong guy. I want to tell her it’s me but I’m scared that she wouldn’t like me back. She likes the things I write because I always over hear her saying how cute the notes are and how cute are my poems.

Now let me tell you what happens when I’m good and bad. When I’m good a do a lot of good things like doing all my chores and always doing my homework. I try to do my homework before 8:00 because that’s when my bad side appear and he doesn’t do homework. I also do good deeds ,but when it’s nighttime and I turn bad, I play mean pranks on people, even my family. One of the easy pranks my bad side dose is placing a bucket on top of a door, so that when they open it, it falls on them. I also try to sleep very early so when I turn to my bad side I will be sleeping. But there was this one-day when I turned to my bad side and I almost controlled it by thinking of Julie, but then my bad side took over me.

    How the curse happened was that I was at a carnival and I was looking for something interesting to try, then I saw this booth and it said “come in to be curse” I didn’t believe that someone could actually be cursed, so I went inside to see what would happen. I herd a old lady say “Come in boy” and I said “Ok”. So the old lady said, “You came in to get cursed right?” I said “No such thing” she said “ sit down and you’ll see”. So sat down on a chair and the old lady started saying these weird words that I couldn't understand and I wasn’t scared because I knew it wasn’t true (but I thought wrong). When the old lady finish next thing you know I’m at my house, in my bed, waking up for school. I felt weird but I that whole thing was a dream. So then I made my own breakfasts but I never made my breakfast before my mom always does.

    I felt weird inside, but didn’t really pay attention to it. So at school I handed in all my homework, and every time teacher asked us questions I will raised my hand, but I almost never raise my hand. I still felt weird inside, I came home and did my homework right away, I never do my homework early, I always do it around 4:00-5:00. Night came and it was about 8:00 and I’m watching T.V, and I feel this change in me. Next thing you know I am a bad boy, with different clothes and everything. 5 minutes later I’m already playing pranks. I put a bucket of water on top of my door and slept. Next thing you know I hear a crash sound and it was my mother, all wet with a bucket on top of her head. She was so mad at, me, and I said “I don’t care” She got furious. She told me that I’m grounded for a month and to stay in bed. When she left. I got out of my bed and put a bucket of water in every door in my house.

    When I woke up I went downstairs and everyone was wet. I felt sorry for them, so I explained everything about how I got the good and bad curse and how my bad side takes over. They didn’t believe a thing. So I told them when I come back home and when the time is 8:00 they’ll see. So I came back home and did all of my homework. Then when the time became 8:00, I feel the same change in me, and my whole family was looking. Then I said “what you guys looking at, go look at something else.” Then they started to believe me that I actually got curse. So what they’ll do is before I turn into my bad side they will lock me in my room and also my bed time is at 7:30. I have told you every thing you need to know about my curse.

       TO BE CONTINUED...

   

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